I walked past your flat today and almost knocked on the door.
I thought I heard your voice and hoped to turn to see your face.
I almost called you on the phone,
then remembered you would not pick up at all.
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Heart touching rendition vivacious with strong emotions. Well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Maria.
Hi maria, I liked this poem very much. A delight in reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Many thanks for sharing your sorrow here, and your bro wouldn't laughed at you. He would have read his sis' beautiful mind.
I walked past your grave tonight and left a smile by the side. For all the things I said I wouldn’t be and all the people I would not turn in to. To find I’ve become what I hated most and how you would of laughed at me...... in memory of your brother Colin. sweet memories..... penned in a wonderful and memorable way. thank you dear poetess.. tony
I walked past your grave tonight and left a smile by the side. For all the things I said I wouldn’t be and all the people I would not turn in to. To find I’ve become what I hated most and how you would of laughed at me. to be alone without the loved one.......to suffer that loneliness at the grave... thank you for expressing these feelings very well in this poem. thank you dear poetess. tony
Hello Poet Maria I enjoyed your poem, very sad and well written. Loyd
This poem touch my heart, can only be written by someone who experience pain of losing a love one. Love this poem.
A fine tribute poem, very well penned. Love the line: I walked past your grave tonight and left a smile by the side. Very poignant.
Lovely Dear, it's as if you have taken a short cut through the window and it's face....iip
Maria, such beautiful words that have touched my heart. Colin already knows your beauty and would be proud of these words written for him. Thank you. I have saved these words that hold so much meaning.
Loaded with Love and longings! Rich imagery!