Friday, November 16, 2012

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 3.5

I miss you when I start my day
I miss you and your every way
I miss you wherever I go
I miss you in my work I do
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Zeenat Fatima
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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

Missing someone everywhere reflects a true and sincere love. A nice poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 January 2013

So romantic, so passionate, so heartfelt... thank you for sharing.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple but passion of love... truly love.. raw bliss... emotion...

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 30 December 2012

simple but passion of love... truly love.. raw bliss... emotion...

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Kanav Justa 29 December 2012

I also wrote a poem similar to this.. but yours is way better than me.... nice work.. it was straight from your heart.. lovely write

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Xelam Kan™ 29 December 2012

ya everybody miss some one somewhere....... poem is quite simple but with color with true passion of love...... infact this missing is called love..... a true love ...... keep penning and definitely you will hold the pulse of rhyming and rhythmic composition.... do read good poets and chew over again and again..... baaqi baad ma kahon ga...... tnx fa sharing

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Hans Vr 23 November 2012

beautifuly penned poem

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Asif Andalib 22 November 2012

Lovely flow and beautiful expression of emotions. Keep it up

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2012

A fine adorable miss u poem. Do read mine too.

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