Thursday, June 21, 2012

I Miss You... Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today I stand at this gate
With anticipation and want
I look down the only path
Your footprints still fresh
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Simon Odhiambo
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Charles Jagongo Ogola 27 August 2012

Hmmnnn. Beautiful. The lines are so great. I like this poem.

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Frank Okoth 27 August 2012

magical, i will recite it to my audience :) Ayie kodi ur invited to read mine as well.......

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Tiernan Watson 22 June 2012

I know that feeling. I suppose I can relate to it with my beloved grandfather's death. I had so many great memories with him and I like this poem because you did a good job expressing that sort of feeling. Even if it wasn't a death that you were writing about.

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