Today I stand at this gate
With anticipation and want
I look down the only path
Your footprints still fresh
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magical, i will recite it to my audience :) Ayie kodi ur invited to read mine as well.......
I know that feeling. I suppose I can relate to it with my beloved grandfather's death. I had so many great memories with him and I like this poem because you did a good job expressing that sort of feeling. Even if it wasn't a death that you were writing about.
Hmmnnn. Beautiful. The lines are so great. I like this poem.