i didn't count the days,
weeks smiled at me as they went by,
months danced and sang with me,
years wiped away my tears.
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feelings xpressed beautifuly.. Luvd reading it.. Heart touching poem :)
She is the best Person there could ever be, I could just imagine her capabilities, this poem makes feel thE gratitude of having had a women who became both a mother and a father to me, eish thanks for pEnning this doWn bra Siya, thanks a lot bro, excellent work as usual....great!
So touching poem, a dedication to your beloved mother.The smile and care of a mother give strenght, her smile is the engine that makes your life worthy..Cristina Teodor
she lives in your every action, feeling, and thought! great poem!
Amazing! everyone should read this, thankyou for allowing something so personal to be shared.
Yes brother, true, no education could mould a child as a mother's smile does..From deep inside of heart there is no way to let a loved one out, yet we miss them dearly, I miss mine for over 20 years now.. Touching poem, thank you for share.
ohhhhh really great bhuti.....i can see your tears here.... i smile a genuine smile, becouse you never gave a fake smile. i love these lines......
Ooooooo feel so deep here, lovely and precious gems fall from your eyes Siya, i saw it hahahaha....yeah it touching me too...and i feel good to read this from A to ( not Z) but end of lines...(Submitted Date: Monday, February 13,2012) hahhaha :) keep it up buddies_Unwritten Soul
When I read poetry like this, I am reminded of my own innocence. An innocence I can only wish I could depict as well. Well done and beautiful too!