I Miss You ♦ Comments

i wanted to see that gaze piercing right through my heart i wanted to hear that melody scratching right across my soul. the very first verses of your poem caught my attention.. very fine poem of romance... tony

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely brought forth from the inner recesses of the heart. lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Sam.

i wanted to touch her purity streaming right through my sins i wanted her to be with me a little a little more than eternity, , , , she is my inspiration, an inspiration that makes me crazy- love is always a mystery. a fine love poem.. tony

A lovely poem.... But depicting a great sorrow... May your wish be granted.... Believe in almighty.. Naila

Very impressive write, Sam. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.