Wednesday, November 25, 2009

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 2.5

Its been a month since uve gone,
Everything is messed up;
And all the things are yet to be done.
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Ashwin Satyal
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Hadi Arnaout 25 November 2009

hi your poem is so senstive it has strongs feelings but you can write more.... take care of the type writing mstakes. goodluck

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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2009

Them letters become like gold

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Ashwin Satyal

Ashwin Satyal

Kathmandu, Nepal
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