Friday, November 11, 2005

I Miss You... Comments

Rating: 4.5

I miss hearing you say 'Miss. Long Legs'
I miss you showing me how to make a cake
A cake that you would make from scratch
Decorate yourself
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Ashley Olson
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Tarapada Mohapatra 03 November 2007

very touchy and emotional. It speaks how much you loved your grandma. Please read my poems and advise

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Ashley Slingerland 05 September 2006

That was a great poem. I'm sure your grandma would be proud of you and she would love this poem.

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Jon Lloyd 16 November 2005

It is one of life's great sadnesses that loss inspires such beautiful elegies, and the subjects are not around to listen. As Lucy said, she would have been very proud, I am sure.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Quite a mature piece of work - well done!

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Lucy Burrow 11 November 2005

Ashley, this is a beautiful tribute to you grandmother, I am sure she would be very proud. Love, Lucy

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Ashley Olson

Ashley Olson

Torrington, CT
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