Dear Sister,
I remember your name,
I remember your face,
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i really like this poem...many people feel like you and i know how hard that is...not to the exact extreme but it brought up my own feelings of longing to have that one person back...
true so true, it really is very heart warming fill with longing, I pray for your sister to come back soon....thanks for sharing and keep writing 10+ rgds asif
heart warming, Anusha! ! ! ...this poem is heart warming! ! ....great piece u have here and i pray she comes back.......congratulations from me and its a 10 from me! !
i really like this peom.......this poem reminds me of me and my older brother, he moved out of the house a year ago but now i miss him, he's like my best friend....... i really love this poem your talented.
I no that your sister would love this poem. Your heart speaks true love......Wonderful write keep it up :)
this poem is so touching we cant foget someone who really marked on our life.............really gr8 poem
dear Anusha... great job, like it n' thnks for the invitn...stay bless
Very very moving poem. Absolutely loved the way you express your sentiments. 'nobody knows what they've got till it's gone' is definately a saying that you followed well in this. Amazing your ability to keep a consistent upbeat rhythm while writing about something so saddening. I can definately relate myself. The fact that when you are used to the company of another and find yourself alone, you no longer know what to do and instead reminisce about the times you once had. definately a 10 out of 10. You captured the emotions perfectly in each line. It continued to build up and up and up and then like a rollercoaster just dropped. That's what readers can relate to is the tragic things that happen.
Anusha - It is a good display of controlled emotion to your sister.
This is very good :) Reminds me of my brother quite a bit. I like your style -jenna kaminski.
Dear Anusha, The value of near & dear ones is realised better when they are far away and for a longer time. You’ve excellently brought out your feelings. The flow is smooth. You will, certainly, be a great poet. Keep it up. # 10.
the poem is wonderful anusha i liked it :) thanks for the invitation.
It's a wonderful poem.. touching write & heart..Iove it, let me to share this for my dear one...thx u 4 sharing
Thats a beautiful poem, portraying the love and rivalry between siblings.....Thats the same with my sister and me too.......In the end, we always end up missing each other! Nice write, from the heart!
a write full of sweetness love and sincerity inside...very much pleasing to read...thanks for the invitation...10
vow Great! what a touching write. congrats surya.