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Beautiful and charming poem. Written in the light and enrapturing way.

this comparison: ''And of your silky kisses too Like these roseate butterflies'' fulfill with color and this mixed metaphor: ''Fluttering down to alight Gracefully and softly'' can amplify so deeply....the missing...10++

Softly romantic like the butterflies floating down - I like it Nizamettin - Cindy

lovely simile and image painted well here............romantic!

simple but very meaningful...great write....10

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Great concept, . Great submission.