Thursday, March 12, 2009

I Miss You Comments

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I remind the times we spent together
With the love of our heart and respect each other
I miss it, it is too late later
I want you to come back, I can`t wait for after
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Luwi Habte
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A T 11 July 2009

Very much enjoyed your poem... i kow what you mean when you cant help but wonder about that person... very good writing i like it alot

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Ershad Mazumder 28 May 2009

Dear Habte, it is more a reporting than a poem. Keep in your mind that poem is not prose. It is just like a painting. You must understand what colour means. Read poems of contemporary great poets. Also read my poems.

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Saadat Tahir 17 May 2009

very nice lines keep writing an sharing cheers

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Jonathan Ghirmay 24 March 2009

its so amaizig girl u become a good poeter from time to time and i want to tell u that its a nice poem that i have never read it before so keep it

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