Sunday, February 1, 2009

I Miss You.... Comments

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The nights are dark, the days are long,
The heart is weak but the emotions are strong.

All things are pale and colorless,
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Jyoti Joseph
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Herbert John 12 December 2009

you are nt just the body...there is so much.....you are everywhere...root coz of misery is desire or mental conditioning....a desire when nt fulfilled leads to sorrow...observe this phenomenon...

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Ravi Sathasivam 05 December 2009

Beautiful rhythmic poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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rago rago 09 April 2009

well rythmic poem......nice write............congrats.......

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Alyssa Marquardt 01 February 2009

i really like your rhymes and this whole poem is great.

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