Monday, January 12, 2009

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 4.6

For Jap & JL

I long for the golden sun on this winter day
I pause walking by the seaside, the tide is high
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Ted M 06 July 2009

Very interesting and romantic. You can take the reader away to that thoughts of yours.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 January 2009

holding me close and wiping my tears dry I'm standing here alone as the waves whine heart swaddles across the grin of green love yet silhouetted by breath of lone silence.., what a wonderfu piece of love loking to the blue sea as when waves whine....yet eloquently curved throug luscious glow across the passion, ingenious write by the lucidity, well penned,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Michael Gale 13 January 2009

Mighty fine poem. Your poems are a pleasurable read. God bless all lonely lovers of the wintery nights, and poets too-MJG.

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Ency Bearis 13 January 2009

wonderful poem..nice imagery write a simile..10

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I love this poem the picture is so clear.. very nice KRISTA

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