* I Miss You * Comments

Nature Love when you is some thing you remember that thing you miss…is equal to getting that …is captured in your poem and nicely Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

how beautifully u hv described.Wow is the word for this one...10

only if the place could speak would this poem be truly gifted by what it deserves. really an amazing write. as you reach the end how beautifully the poem reveals the hidden personification. great work! ! !

Your greens Your every mystery Just wanderings in this desert of demise Like the falling leaf with winter dews........ i miss everything of you and long for it in days to come... lovely state of mind to be expressed in words. i enjoyed it.....10 read m ine.. i miss... miss i miss you... come home... mom i miss you

The hill and the valley The road that leads me to the ramp of heavenly mutely Only nostalgia and agony so beautiful expressions ya.

wait... u meant it abt a village? ? ? can`t believe it! i just thought u`ve made happy one of ur lovely gfriends... now seriously, marvelous poem, i really can understand those feelings abt a place from the past. BRAVO!