Friday, April 18, 2008

I Miss You Comments

Rating: 3.5

i miss you
if i write here, i cry
in my insides, i am blue
tears swim in my eyes
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Spirit Litter
COMMENTS
~ Jon London ~ 01 May 2008

Spirit, your heart was definitely in this fine example of poetry, very believable...a great write all the best, stay strong Jon

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Karen Delta 27 April 2008

such a sad but lovely poem. loved it.

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Undead Perez 25 April 2008

i like that you really showed your feelings. I wonder, did this really happen 2 you?

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Hope Blankenship 25 April 2008

i like this poem it really says how bad you miss this person i like the way you worded it like only a true poet would thanks for reading my poems also

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Broken Peaces 23 April 2008

A sad and heartfelt poem Ihope your tears of sorrow soon turn to tears of joy 10 Chris

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 April 2008

love as longing true wish still seems to tie by the blue just as rainbow by the moon heart yet cries for the embrace...............love yet intense by remembering, yet luscious green, unique expression of love, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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