i miss you
if i write here, i cry
in my insides, i am blue
tears swim in my eyes
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i like that you really showed your feelings. I wonder, did this really happen 2 you?
i like this poem it really says how bad you miss this person i like the way you worded it like only a true poet would thanks for reading my poems also
A sad and heartfelt poem Ihope your tears of sorrow soon turn to tears of joy 10 Chris
love as longing true wish still seems to tie by the blue just as rainbow by the moon heart yet cries for the embrace...............love yet intense by remembering, yet luscious green, unique expression of love, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
Spirit, your heart was definitely in this fine example of poetry, very believable...a great write all the best, stay strong Jon