Stretching further for the ones you’ve lost,
Wishing you could see their eyes again
Just like gazing for the same star every night
And feel them...
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The poem reads really well.....Amazing imagery like all of them say!
I have to agree with Samanyan, the imagery in this poem sets it apart from many of your others. And the fact that you use it to develop your themes makes it uniquely yours.
ur poems are so majestic in a way very beautiful i love them
i have been reading several of your poems they are lyrical and true
I like the third stanza: So I took the rain As an armour of choice; Concealing every tear That mine cheeks can encounter Just so I can look above Yet again, Without a sign or frown of weakness. A beautiful poem. B.B.
I love your poems, but this line: So I took the rain as an armor of choice; concealing ever tear... That is fantastic.
Lovely poem! Very touching indeed!