Wednesday, June 2, 2010

I Miss My Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I miss my swing, I miss my whip,
I miss my mother's grip,
my dirty hands and my soiled feet
my filthy face, my innocence.
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Valsa George 30 September 2015

The sense of nostalgic longing for the days of childhood left behind is powerfully expressed here! If a young man feels so much, how much more we elders miss the bliss of childhood and innocence! This is a very sweet write Cuyam!

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

Very nicely narrated it, beautiful words.......... I miss the places where we used to play- I miss my childish years yeah

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Stephen Pennell 22 July 2015

I take away a feeling of growing up and reflecting on whats gone

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Romeo Della Valle 24 May 2012

A well crafted write clearly describing fun memories of yesterday that still vividly live within your mind and heart! 10+++ Thank you for sharing amigo and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Pari Dharawat 23 November 2011

Great job in putting together the words which goes right through the heart!

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Joan Fajardo 05 July 2010

simple but made me pause for a while.. God bless you mi amigo! ! !

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Isabella Afanasieff 03 June 2010

This poem really hits home for me...Great Job!

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Tim Cook 03 June 2010

i reckon everyone will be able to relate to that well done mate!

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