I Miss My Hometown Comments

The place of my birth The land of my fathers The cradle of my youth I miss its proud mountain That stands aloof In the heart of the mainland I miss its ocean teeming with sealife....great love and emotions for your motherland is reflected here. An adorable piece of poetry....5 stars.

had u known all that you will now miss you would never have had the occasion to composing such a really MISSING POEM otherwise on PH SEE EVER CLOUD has a silver lining PL READ MY MOMS'S SMILES U may like

This is a lovely poem emanating from a beautiful poetic heart! Your longing for your hometown, its surroundings is vividly reflected in this beautiful poem. My favorite lines: I miss my hometown/The place of my birth/The land of my fathers/The cradle of my youth/I miss its proud mountain! Appreciated…10

Apparently you are no longer in your hometown. Many of us feel nostalgic about our origins, and I am no exception. I really like this poem. By the way, it's not too late to edit it and change 'trumpled' to the word you intended.

This poem resonates for me, Nudershada. There are circumstances in life, beyond our control that deter us from going back to our hometown. A very touching piece beautifully crafted.10

A fine poem about being homesick.

It's such an effective poem that it touches the heart and soul of its readers. A great poem by Nudershada Cabanes.

I miss its ocean teeming with sealife I miss its green sea............two or ONE body of water(s) ? ..........or did you mean green tea? ? ha ha. i've enjoyed reading this poem. i suppose you are stuck in a big city now, or, heaven forbid, in the U.S. of A.! ! ! to MyPoemList. and it looks like you are relatively new to PoemHunter. WELCOME ABOARD! bri ;) (continued) ............

How poignant is this poem! Thanks for sharing.