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wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i love the rhyming playing with it stunningly... the thoughts how it erodes....

this is great! !

Love is to give and sacrifice Words may not prove or suffice It will be simple trajectory of mind May prove any time its essence and kind ...yes i love this one, this is real unwritten soul...love it 10+++

this is a great poem you have a great way with words i give this poem 10+++

very strong ending to a powerful poem. good tone and mood setting. good job hasmukh

um very good of a poem you have here

Love is to give and sacrifice Words may not prove or suffice It will be simple trajectory of mind May prove any time its essence and kind mh! i like this

Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

aaaa - first verse abab - second verse up to the last. yeah... it's good to vary the rhyme patterns. We're in modern days... well done!

...i didn't care for it much.

This one is my favorite

love is to give and sacrifice. very well put. a ten

‘…Love is to give and sacrifice…’ Diamonded adage forgotten mostly, poetically you crammed into me. Thanks Sir Ten++ niv Please grace with your comments &c to my posts [new too] niv

You may call me dear, Agony and pain you bear, no complaints or words I hear, Why not you make it.WOO! man this real ting no doubt about it

How to prove and show the earnest feeling? I can’t shed the tears even if willing? - I can see the other side of things from this perspective thank you for recommending

Love is to give and sacrifice Words may not prove or suffice It will be simple trajectory of mind May prove any time its essence and kind great! .............................................................

the presentation is sweet..some lines for this.... i miss your call every now and then your voice..ur voice i want to hear i miss every time we talk in phone as if we are just talking at home..

a good flow of thought and I miss........if I fail to go through................