Tuesday, December 18, 2012

I Might Not Be Beautiful, Comments

Rating: 4.9

I might not be beautiful,
But I could intoxicate you,
Melt through you like an aged Scotch Whiskey.
I could make you dizzy with how you make me feel.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Lovely truthfulness. Enjoyed.

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Hans Vr 10 January 2013

yeah Ruby, Beauty is not all on our skin. Somewhere deep inside is where it resides.Very well written

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Tony Karas 05 January 2013

Beauty comes from within.... I think you have plenty.

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Owain Glyn 29 December 2012

Beauty really does come from within, as do your words, sounds to me like you've got it made!

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Valerie Dohren 25 December 2012

Wow - very sensual.

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Unwritten Soul 25 December 2012

That was a smart idea from you..yeah that's how you explain how precious you are in your own way......and it incomparable! a smart mind for beautiful feeling_SOul

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Joseph Anderson 23 December 2012

If you got the money, I got the time. Age and distance put me in dream mode.A jolly good spirited write.Happy holidays to you and yours

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Stevie Taite 22 December 2012

Oh and by the way, you are beautiful!

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Stevie Taite 22 December 2012

Take a swig of that spirit, that makes the mouth tingle, and other places, then when you have finished, bang it down in the bar and demand another! Maybe even the bottle! Loved it!

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Ruby Honeytip 21 December 2012

Hahahaha....Vroom Vroom! !

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Heather Wilson 20 December 2012

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, added to these words you are a winner, great work.

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Saadat Tahir 20 December 2012

Wow....very witty and loaded with confidence, Eve’s daughter at her naughtiest. The kinda confidence that comes from knowing yer man. The end leaves us with a tinge of wistful wonder….. Enjoyed :)

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Lyn Paul 19 December 2012

So beautiful. Drunk on me, how sweet.thank you for making us smile

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Maggie Munro 19 December 2012

There is beauty at your fingertips, every time you share your words....

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Red O'mara 18 December 2012

Ruby, we never know what you'll give us next. But would you be so brazen today if yesterday your husband had helped you with that stone in your shoe? Beautiful or not, you do write very nicely.

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Tony Karas 18 December 2012

Beauty comes from the soul and manifests in attitude. I think you've got it!

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