Sunday, May 15, 2022

I Met You (English Sonnet) Comments

Rating: ★5.0

(for Annelize)

I met you on a bright hot summer day,
your smile was radiant; your eyes did gleam,
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Gert Strydom
fun sonnet
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Form Verifier 16 May 2022

Better than your usual mediocre effort, BUT line 7 is missing a syllable and line 8 has an extra syllable. Overuse of 'do' and 'did'. Is not iambic and has no flow.

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Jayne Davies 15 May 2022

Beautiful. Lovely words.

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Caustic Critic 16 May 2022

Nonsense!

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
Gert Strydom
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Johannesburg, South Africa
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