Tuesday, May 12, 2009

I Met Myself Comments

Rating: 4.9

I was scheduled
to attend a meeting
which was supposed
to start at five
...
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shweta advani
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Good poem. Just one point, " I suddenly met myself n laughed at the discovery.." ‘to laugh at' means to make fun of. That does not gel with the rest of the poem.

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rohit sapra 26 May 2009

These are nice verses. Moments of silence can help one realize, the meaning of life.

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Smiley Hooker 20 May 2009

i love this one, too, dear Shweta! this is a poem of confidence. appreciating your self is appreciating God's creation. keep up the good work.: -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) : -) ++

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lovely write...a revealing one...excellently penned

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

a good write, Shweta...you have brought out well your concept there...well worded piece...10

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Vinod Ak 13 May 2009

wow! simply superb! hope you are able to sustain that blissfull state! 10++++

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Muhammad Ali 12 May 2009

O! it was a great moment, surely! cheers for those seconds! 10.. Ali

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