Wednesday, April 1, 2009
I Messed Up- Chocolate Chip Comments
Rating: ★5.0
We used to be so connected,
We used to be so deep in love,
Unfortunately our love was badly affected,
I guess it wasn't written above,
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John Weber
15 April 2009
The feeling of regret on this work is palpable, Shutter Queen! Often, when we fail due to complacency the loss resounds with greater intensity. Such notions invade my minds when I read this one. Warm regards, John.
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7/21/2025 7:19:12 AM # 1.0.0
A magnificent and affectionate piece. Your words filled with great sorrow and regret. Very intense and powerful plea. We all make mistakes and do things we wished we hadn't, but every step we take is a part of who we are now. We must look at our mistakes and try and take a different path in the future.