I Me And Myself Comments

this is quite a poem u got here..truly genuine and unique! truly you indeed! u amazing! =)

I love this poem, again in this, there is a philosophy of 'impermanaece'. They way you have painted it.... 'now i see that everything is none'. And he is in his real 'awarenes' after being betrayed, so expalined...'i surely wont become a fool'. You've got a good future in poetry.

Nice work. I can see you've used the verses quite well. The title could've been a bit more relevant to the theme - I mean like something that reflects the pain in the poem. A nice peice it is anyway. Keep writing.

a wonderful write/rhymes..a sililoquy...well done..

nice poem emotiones are up and downs butr its good 10++++++++++++ keep up the good work xx kimberley xx

loaded with sensitivity and finely penned

the emotions are definitely there and u just have to work a little bit on ur rhymes...is better to write a poem with a blank verse or one with rhyming...to me, thats where u should start frm..but overall, it's certainly a rich and sentimental poem! a 9 frm me =D

Very long and very touching! I like it! I really enjoyed it. Keep up the fresh ideas.

that is a very pretty piece. penned very nicely!