Sunday, September 6, 2020

I May Not Return Comments

Rating: 4.3

Let it flow to these eyelids
Let me fall like a drop
The relationship is a small word
Why spread in vain
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Shakira Nandini
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Kevin Patrick 06 September 2020

Love the cruelest joy it can be soft as velvet but turn into a handful of thorns, we try so hard to communicate with one another but we still cants see the others words. A beautiful poem Shakira, it touches well on the subject of loss and love so well, thank you for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 September 2020

'Don't call me from behind I may not return' - Calling from behind is a bad manner. A call from the front is less likely to go in vain.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2020

what a beautiful poem what a lovely creation no wonder this is a very small world but your poem has been all over heard well done poetess

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