I May Die Comments

'I May Breathe Again; if I Die'. Lol Kingfemi.

This is just so true, but ' I May Breathe Again; if I Die'. Lovely work.9points dear.kingfemi.

so very touching and beautiful expression.. moving..

A very touching stream of thought which plagues everyone of us one time or the other! But it is so whimsical and we don't want to happen it to us or any body close to us! The poem however is so moving and deserves full 10

I find it so hard to hide my true feelings, dis poem is so killing, I love the suspends, hilly blond thoughts, and pining truth; displayed in dis poem. Dis is one of my best. You are going to grow higher dear. Thanks did stole and soaked me away. Bravo! Kingfemi