I had no courage
To put her in cage
To be kept as pet
So decided to let
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: -) : -) sukanya dhatrak3 minutes ago Beautiful! Touching piece! Comment +1 a poem of need
v Alan Green 'Guppyman'3 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a love true Comment +1 Good
superguy3401 minute ago This was good, but know that not all poems have to rhyme, which I think may have made this poem a bit too confined since you had to rhyme with the line above. But I still liked the idea of your poem Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no it is style. i need to rhy, it flows.
Alan Green 'Guppyman'3 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a love true Comment +1 Good
superguy3401 minute ago This was good, but know that not all poems have to rhyme, which I think may have made this poem a bit too confined since you had to rhyme with the line above. But I still liked the idea of your poem Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no it is style. i need to rhy, it flows.
Naidz Ladia and Lucette Bailliet like this. Naidz Ladia i may be called...i saw this in poem hunter....so good to read oldy...hope ur fine 3 hours ago · Like