Friday, April 22, 2022

I Make A Bridge Of Love To Drink Comments

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Between the shores of my dream
Under the flowing lustrous holy river
Where the white dove of wishes
Floats on the chariot of stars
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M. Asim Nehal
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Juhaina Tumlu 24 April 2022

X C lent poem Dr. Nehal

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Nabakishore Dash 23 April 2022

Excellently written poem dear Dr.Nehal.

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Deepak S S 22 April 2022

Between the shores of my dream Under the flowing lustrous holy river Where the white dove of wishes Five STARS

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Deepak S S 22 April 2022

Nicely written AsimJi

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Michael Jack 22 April 2022

Niche lines: When those two uncut diamonds in the dark night luminescence my heart's mind Millions of joy float around.

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