Seduced by the dark side
The force
Too strong to resist
As his hands slowly
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I loved the way you had started this poem.... and the way you carried the poem on your words....until the end, where it was the best...... you imgine the best of the best. Good read.
A clever concept. I was expecting you to tell Vader, 'My, the force is certainly with you tonight, sugar! '
No way! ! ! ! This OS the best title I've come across so far