Thursday, March 10, 2016

I Made Her Lie On My Lap Comments

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She came.
i made her lie on my lap.
i looked at her eyes,
shining eyes, lips full of desire,
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Dev Anand
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 August 2019

she looked at me. i looked at her. i saw her moving in love. and this alone is love

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 July 2016

u really are a fresh teenager in love

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 July 2016

ur sure are a teenager in love commencing now

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Alicia Phillips 15 March 2016

I like this one it makes it seem when you look at each other its as though you two are very in love

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