I'm Yet To Figure Out… Comments

When love happens first, it baffles the heart with the questions you have asked in this poem.Because it is a beautiful feeling, heart gives least resistance in spite of all the questions.

A very beautiful poem that touches a chord with the readers, because love is a universal feeling and there is no one who can remain untouched by love.

'crossed paths'..not 'crossed path' ....'then I yet to figure out' use '...am yet...' Maybe more proofreading would make the poem as good as I know it can be. Even so, I give 4 stars. ****

line 9: 'took', not 'take' : )

3rd line 'I've', not 'I'm'. : )

You are not afraid to write your innermost thoughts which is so refreshing, you're fearless, so talented and a true original!

(cont.) whether 'fact' or 'fiction', this is a fine poem-story. to MyPoemList and perhaps into a showcase this year yes, i want to include it in my November showcase, in which i plan to showcase (more) poems by poets of the Indian subcontinent, as i've done in September 2018's showcase, found in my list of PH poems. bri)

(cont.) i suspect that the narrator (you! ?) may be INFATUATED with him. this would mean: 'you' may: be inspired with an intense but short-lived passion or admiration for (someone or something) . see SHORT-LIVED? it COULD turn into 'real love' [whatever THAT is], AND your attraction to 'him' may become less INTENSE {bothersome? } but stronger in some ways. (cont.)

(cont.) (you use prude as an adjective, but it is a noun you want prudish, i think. or did you want prudent, which also would seem (to me) strange? re the last 3 lines: I DON'T KNOW THE ANSWERS I DON'T KNOW ALL THE DETAILS OF THE RELATIONSHIP! (cont.)

(cont.) ...I forgive my prude heart for loving him [[ does your heart love him? , or do YOU love him? , OR both you AND your heart? , OR are YOU and YOUR HEART ONE? ? ]] i thought your heart conspired AGAINST YOU to help him win your heart! why then would you call it a prude heart? (cont.)

(cont.) line 9: use take not took here. BUT if you delete(d) did, then i'd say use took. And primal belongings sounds very provocative! ! OR did you mean he stole your baby rattle or pacifier and won't give back to you? ? ? ha ha. (cont.)

i would say I am yet to OR I'm yet to I found my heart conspired against me for him, ...a most interesting line! ! ! who would have thought a heart would do SUCH A THING! ! ! ? I yet to figure out what beings him in my early morning thoughts, ..SOMETHING IS not right in this line. i think maybe you just hit e instead of r WHEN you typed beings. ha ha (cont.)

Liked the way how you wrote it's ending with a question, makes us really ponder about what you asked. Maybe what we gain is the strength to face all this.

A beautiful, well written poem. I like the way you construct your poems.

Beautiful thoughts arranged so neatly, Ruchi. Thanks for sharing.

I want to ask who will take verdict on him for braking into my thoughts and stealing my mind.. yes in every relationship you learn a lot how to love, how to relate, how all the negative and positive attitudes in you influence the relationship......... both of you are learning...... very fine poem on relationship, love, friendship and the way up to a strong relationship.. thank u for this poem. tony