Thursday, August 20, 2009

I'M Waiting (Cameo) Comments

Rating: 5.0

waiting
i'm always waiting
the days and nights that you’re not here
i'm waiting
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lady grace
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rago rago 30 August 2009

simple and fantastic..............

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

it is a really wonderful sad lyric poem................10+++++

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Yelena M. 24 August 2009

'sixty seconds, sixty minutes twenty four hours of daylight you miss..' a beautiful write on waiting...shame to me i never heard of cameo and am very interested in it..harmony in its construction..thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Lalitha iyer 24 August 2009

I am still waiting hoping he is alive somewhere sometimes when ages retreat may be I could see his face but death is nearing and my hairs are greying gracefully I admit I am losing ground yet I am waiting just only waiting for nothing else I could do but wait for him to take my limping hand and kiss upon it saying come on now die peacefully..............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

sixty seconds, sixty minutes twenty four hours of daylight you miss, , ....there is great enjoyment in wait andwe understand the feelings only in that period. it takes us to lonely moments and self addressal but no anwer is found only desires burns fromwithin.....10 read mine new blood all over and simpe grace

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Ying Escalona 23 August 2009

ahhh..wa man koy apil...sila ra man...okey lang.ana man gyod ka ba? bye....

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 August 2009

most of the happy moments are those spent in waiting. shan. every day i post 5 poems. you may read some.

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Akram Saqib 22 August 2009

to wait and to die are equal great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Nikunj Sharma 22 August 2009

donno myself what a cameo is........but this poem speaks for itself...gud work grace

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Ravi A 21 August 2009

Actually, waiting is not boredom when it comes to waiting for our dear ones. There is an element of expectation which enlivens those moments.

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Indira Babbellapati 21 August 2009

life is a long waiting...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 August 2009

very well penned..............

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Ency Bearis 21 August 2009

wonderful thoughts...intersting style...

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Eyan Desir 21 August 2009

hmmm, hmmmm very interesting piece good write

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Dr Kamran Haider 21 August 2009

love is more profound when the person u love is not around... that's the beauty of waiting n missing... good one....

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 August 2009

very beautiful indeed.. This is lovely.. yeah Carl write very beautiful cameo s and whitney s... lovess shan

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Carol Gall 21 August 2009

nice write lady.............

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Siddharth Singh 21 August 2009

I am sure, more than the daylight he must be missing you. Good one.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 August 2009

Pray, your long wait should end in success sooner or later.

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Kee Thampi 21 August 2009

this poet really see the same dream of bushes

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