I’m Undone Comments

.life eventually helps us get through touch moments.........beautiful write...... You would like- -Never look like one

Beautiful with a certain stillness. Aching and melancholy...great work.

I share your grief Amitava, and your loneliness - beautiful poem.

In absolute stillness, this poem communicates so much.... Now I understand that grief also can make one a good poet as love! Amazing write, Amitava!

Very strong emotion here a sadness ands longing of the soul captured in your excellent poem

Intense feelings of loneliness in the still of the night so beautifully written!

pin drop silence, I like it, thanks.

Absolutely moving and beautiful, Amitava. Rakhee has been with you. In the quietness of your soul, you will keep her close in a poem.