I'M Too Small Comments

Yes, I like it. It's straight-forward and honest. IMHO I'd use 'infinitely' and 'as small as' or maybe even end with small. Take a look at some of Charles Bukowski's and Billy Collins' writing - you might like them.

this is really a stndard work and poem..you consider yourself small but if its think that your ideas and thoughts are making you big. I really am inspired from your work and it seems that you think deep wy and concieve things very deep and percive them highly correct way..means correction or completion is your intention..i like this..and felt in your poems.well done..