Wednesday, June 3, 2015

I'M Tired Comments

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I’m tired of all ripples in the shades
I’m tired of the dead flowers in this place
I’m tired of the bad energy you bring
I’m tired of the hearing the bad man sing
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Melissa L Tamayo
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Anil Kumar Panda 08 July 2015

This is sort of surrender to the negative forces that we have to encounter while performing our daily duties.Very nicely written.Loved it.

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Susan Lacovara 03 June 2015

This is a loud testament to the emotional struggles we face trying to resurrect inner strength to move on a positive direction. Although we grow tired of the suffocating negative energy that can slither into our lives, it is most important to remain true to your heart and your own quest for light. An honest poem which speaks volumes. Well done. PEACE

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Melissa L Tamayo

Melissa L Tamayo

Bronx, NY
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