I'm tired
Not i went to sleep at 2: 00 am and had to wake up early
Not like dozing off in class
Not tired like I need more sleep
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Very true. The ills of the world are tiring, and they will wear you down. Nice perspective.
You have written about the paradox in the world of today so poignantly. We are all sailing in the same boat wondering: why we can't do much about the many evils that are plaguing us today. I like the way you have conceptualized the whole poem.