Saturday, October 10, 2009

I'M Tired Comments

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I'm tired
Not i went to sleep at 2: 00 am and had to wake up early
Not like dozing off in class
Not tired like I need more sleep
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Leila Mass
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Gita Ashok 21 June 2010

You have written about the paradox in the world of today so poignantly. We are all sailing in the same boat wondering: why we can't do much about the many evils that are plaguing us today. I like the way you have conceptualized the whole poem.

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Gold Fish 10 October 2009

Very true. The ills of the world are tiring, and they will wear you down. Nice perspective.

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Leila Mass

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