I'M Tired Comments

Nice.Well expressed.But I see death as a short cut for cowards and, often times, short cuts are longer ways.There is much to life, just reach out and discover that life is good!

Again charge with emotional fortitude... It's like grasping air while choking...

wow this poem written like a paper was emotionally attacked! i mean hey it is real pain u share through the pain...In our life dont ever give up, who never felt pain and tortured in life, tired of life...no....if we give up we keep weak, no chance to wake up..but come one let fight and u will see future still bright...it still a long way to go...each torture and pain in life will leave u a priceless lessons that u cant learn in the school...so be strong and try to fight...keep it up..good luck...(well it is nice poem too, but wish u try to write something motivate urself...kinda therapy)

i really love all ur poems :)

i like this poem and i'm waiting for a new poem

jaimerai cette poem beaucoup, i feel like it's talking about my life, merci for writing this poeme

very scenic and emotional. keep the goog writing

Full of emotion and heartfelt. Could feel the intense through your pen. Yes, Keep writing! ; D