Tuesday, November 13, 2007

I'M Thinking Comments

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The pen is gripped between my fingers.
The tension grows, an idea lingers,
And yet somehow it’s stuck.
I’m thinking, ‘just my luck’!
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 14 May 2008

I've been there so many times Ernestine and you certainly bring out the frustration in your poem. Well done. Love Andrew x

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Brian Dorn 13 November 2007

But, somehow you never seem to run out of great ideas! This is one I think we can all relate to (I know I can) . Keep 'Thinking, ' Ernestine! !

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