I'm thinking, I'm thinking,
That's why, I am really thinking,
There are many things in the world,
That still remains quite untold.
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We think and think Till we get demented... Till our Astrocytes Dendrites ends dry And till we no longer can think and love... I wish you will never stop thinking... And sing forever your song of love...! Written Instantly... according to your thinking...!
Very good, Meriam. Keep thinking and thinking. A person with lots and lots of questions, is the one who will eventually learn most. Nice poem
ya its very great to think and i wish that u will find your answers very soon
The very beauty of this poem is the last line...your thoughts create your work so keep thinking.
i like you style, you're very optimistic and you know how to portray what you wanna say through you writing and to me thats the beginning of something great keep it up Meriam
You need lots of work as a poet, but the premise of questions is a fascinating one. There are so many things to wonder about, and although many of these questions are immature or not well-put, I think you should keep writing and revising your work, because your curiousity will produce good work if you continue to pursue writing.
Nice one Meriam... reminds of me the times when I would get really fed up while studying and throw my hands in the air, and ask 'why' and 'what' out of exasperation!
Beautiful work, as always. Your skill improves with every poem you write.
A VERY INQUISITIVE POEM SHOWING HOW INNOCENT AND AT THE SAME TIME READY FOR THE WORLD YOU ARE NICE POEM.
good work...takes me back to my childhood days when everything was questionable: 0keep writing
A really good poem i really liked. It. Good flow and good questions. Thanks For the invite.
Questions and questions, they’ll never end. Until the earth comes to a stop, that’s the very end. What a brainy insight!