Monday, September 19, 2011

I'm Thinking Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm thinking, I'm thinking,
That's why, I am really thinking,
There are many things in the world,
That still remains quite untold.
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Meriam Joseph
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Questions and questions, they’ll never end. Until the earth comes to a stop, that’s the very end. What a brainy insight!

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Sylva Portoian 21 June 2012

We think and think Till we get demented... Till our Astrocytes Dendrites ends dry And till we no longer can think and love... I wish you will never stop thinking... And sing forever your song of love...! Written Instantly... according to your thinking...!

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Molaire Jules 25 May 2012

Wow! you have some interesting questions here! keep thinking!

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Stella Mary 30 December 2011

You sure all full of questions. Keep writing

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Hans Vr 04 October 2011

Very good, Meriam. Keep thinking and thinking. A person with lots and lots of questions, is the one who will eventually learn most. Nice poem

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Kaitreena Stwert 28 September 2011

ya its very great to think and i wish that u will find your answers very soon

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Ash Iyengar 26 September 2011

hey, its truly superb..i liked it! :)

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Louis Cecile 24 September 2011

The very beauty of this poem is the last line...your thoughts create your work so keep thinking.

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Robert Roberts 21 September 2011

i like you style, you're very optimistic and you know how to portray what you wanna say through you writing and to me thats the beginning of something great keep it up Meriam

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Bonnie Lundgren 21 September 2011

You need lots of work as a poet, but the premise of questions is a fascinating one. There are so many things to wonder about, and although many of these questions are immature or not well-put, I think you should keep writing and revising your work, because your curiousity will produce good work if you continue to pursue writing.

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Cheryl Jacob 21 September 2011

Nice one Meriam... reminds of me the times when I would get really fed up while studying and throw my hands in the air, and ask 'why' and 'what' out of exasperation!

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Stefanie Fontker 20 September 2011

Beautiful work, as always. Your skill improves with every poem you write.

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Nanthinii Mohan 20 September 2011

excellent work of art...well write!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 20 September 2011

A VERY INQUISITIVE POEM SHOWING HOW INNOCENT AND AT THE SAME TIME READY FOR THE WORLD YOU ARE NICE POEM.

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Renu Kakkar 20 September 2011

good work...takes me back to my childhood days when everything was questionable: 0keep writing

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Dave Walker 20 September 2011

A really good poem i really liked. It. Good flow and good questions. Thanks For the invite.

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