Tuesday, October 4, 2011

I'M The One For You' Comments

Rating: 3.1

I will always stand by your side
even if the whole world was against you,
I would plant you a garden of roses
if I thought it would convince you,
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Bernard Snyder
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Btyfulone 22 May 2020

Absolutely adore this written prose... I hope she was listening- I would have!

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Guy Lip-more 10 August 2013

If this isn't love, I don't know what is! Fantastic write.

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

I smiled while i reached the line '...hair and nails are done' it's funny in sweet hahahaha But really i can feel inside through your breathe here, on writing. The sweet words you gave here should stop any flame of other flammable fears because it so hopeful and i really want to see it give a good shine to bright the dark till the 'end of time'...Such a lovely writing and i like it sooooooo much :) writ more Bernard_Unwritten Soul

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Stefanie Fontker 04 October 2011

Lovely write! The love and affection is very clear here, I enjoy the expression of commitment here. You've done a beautiful job.

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