Thursday, September 3, 2015

I'M The One Comments

Rating: 5.0

How could he have known which path to take?
Yet, he journeyed with certainty,
Through a blinding snow he seemed to know
I'm the one..... and found his way to me
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Lora Colon
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Roseann Shawiak 17 September 2015

Wow! A beautifully enticing poem, so full of love for a person! Poignant and unconditional love at it's very best! A certainty that cannot be swayed nor denied! Absolutely divine, touching mind and heart totally! Really great poem, thank you for sharing it! I love it! Give you 100 -10's if possible! RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 17 September 2015

An intense love poem registering the the firmness of love. But when his lips to mine are pressed, I only see what was meant to be, .................. Beautiful

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Kassem Oude 03 September 2015

Spring's Back Spring returns to me back again Trees and bushes wear full buds Sources flow due to heavy rain Heart's affection always floods

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David Wood 03 September 2015

Lovely poem flows really well with good rhyme.

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Lora Colon

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