I'M The Ocean, You'Re The Sky Comments

Beautiful Preets, beautiful, enjoyed reading it. Chhavi Anupam

Well i must tell you that your poem has really got me thinking. I think you're an awesome poetess.What really strikes me about your poetry is your play with words which results in beautiful and very vivid images.

By no means am I eloquent, I've no clever words to describe your poem. But it is beautiful. It is candid. And I thank you for sharing it Michael

profound and vivid imagery....great poem Preeti

Preeti - You did excel in the use of imagery here. You sometimes beat us on maturity in comparison to your age. Those comparisons and the realtion between the ocean and sky in the poem is well thought of - impeccable! The spirituality trickles down the readers minds with each of your words. Simply speaking - this is a remarkable love poem - you did beat many other poets here.

preets...the ocean and the sea...they compliment each other so totally...well written piece...i think the end should have been more punchy...love...nalini

Hi They appear to meet. This got to be your master piece from this matured pen. I love the poem of this kind. They meet when she sweats and while he rains :) They meet, they are not far off I Hope. Hope

Excellent! I see the two valuable souls divided by the illusionary horizon! Something like a spiritual love........the poor ocean evaporates gradually and makes passing clouds in the sky?