Sunday, October 23, 2011
I'M The Nile Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I flow.
I flood.
I fertilize fallow fields at the feet of pharaohs,
As they sit, witnesses of the march of time,
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Laurie Van Der Hart
01 September 2016
Interesting poem. Refreshing perspective. You are a true poet!
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7/22/2025 7:26:53 PM # 1.0.0
Loved the alliterations of your poem! How beautifully you have likened time to the ever flowing Nile! Loved the conceptualization and the free flow of words like the placid currents of the Nile. This morning I have read your oldest and the newest poems on this site and commented on both, two in the latter. To say the least, I am impressed! The poem gets full marks from me,5/5!