I'm The Me, Sin Refugee Comments

We feel very depressed at times.....! But never give in to depression! Life is not to be wasted on harrowing thoughts. Life is to enjoy and help others enjoy! I sense deep melancholy in your lines. Quite touching.....! ! (I have been trying to post comments on your poems. But due to some technical error, I am not able to comment on many of the poems on poem hunter....It is so annoying)

And this 'I' used here is the universal I, we all are included well nigh, we all live our lives knowingly, a sinful life unrepentantly, making the same mistake again and again, condemned to come and go in pain... a lovely self analysis.

Living in death, good write

A powerful poem that vividly portrays a conflict experienced.in oneself. Commission of sins through life will burn the heart, ultimately killing us. An existence without meaning. Another poem of great depth. Cleverly written.