Tuesday, November 26, 2019

I'm The Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

fall to rise!

rise to help
those are falling
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 November 2019

o great poet post this urs also let the world feed upon your beauty as your poetry does reveal gr8888888 that day the same that night the same I'm the same man dawn to dust overall the night I look far, far away before and behind right to left up to down the same flowing, floating again I turn back into me the same time devours something old and vomits something new on the same way but in the new infrastructure this etc

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Valsa George 28 November 2019

We should rise up not for ourselves alone, but for others too to help them rise from their fall! Thus we can help each other. When the world is filled with light, darkness has to retreat. Light has to be shared and it never diminishes by sharing, but only makes everything brighter! Lofty thoughts Mahtab!

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2019

Thank you dear Madam for you thoughtful comment, Thanks a lot Dear Poet

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2019

A well penned composition....10+++

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