Monday, May 16, 2016

I'm Thankful Comments

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When darkness obscures day, I'm thankful,
I need no light to shine on this place
Where long ago I buried dead dreams,
A safe harbor for my tear-stained face
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Lora Colon
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2016

A safe harbor! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2016

A safe habor! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Brian Johnston 21 May 2016

And I'm thankful to find you still expressing your feelings in Poetry Lora, though I would really love for you to find the love that you seem to be missing for so long. Though this poem is filled with irony and references to your suffering alone, I can only suggest that you do have friends here who wish you well and pray for brighter days, even if it is only pizza and beer with Bri Edwards and I.: -)

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Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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