Wednesday, September 16, 2009

I'M Telling You This Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm tired
and I'm hurt.
I can feel the tear in my heart
spreading farther
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Heart of Ice Die Die Die
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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

well expressed thoughts and feelings well done in eloquence................Thanks! ! !

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James Mclain 23 September 2009

it is the deep depresions.. only the best..of good.. people live..and it only goes away.. when you find love..iip...we can fake it.. :)

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Patrick A. Martin 20 September 2009

Cheer up Rach you still got this old fart of a poet 'Down Under' who thinks you are the best thing invented since sliced bread. heehee I luves yer! !

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Darkness J 18 September 2009

Your poem is so touching and so powerfull chosen words. It's the way I feel sometimes. I can see how you feel but it's not the end of the world my dear, we must cheer up :) +10 and courage dear :)

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Romeo Della Valle 16 September 2009

Oh, Rachelle, what a very heart touching poem, feelings freely coming out not from maybe barren lips, but from the bottom of your heart, beautiful, I love it, you got my 10+ vote, Love and Peace, you are strong enough to survive in this world...Romeo

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