I'M Still Bleeding Comments

I like how you compare love to a military struggle - feel like I've survived a few campaigns myself! The image of the soldier, entrenched, putting survival first - sometimes we adopt that mode - just to survive. Emotions are so powerful, they can even kill people, but what ARE emotions? I like how you use the dawn of the new day as an optimistic image. No-one can destroy the essence of you. Keep on writing!