The first time you said you loved me
I was unsure if I felt the same yet I said 'I love you to.',
The first time you held my hand
I was scared but I held yours to,
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yeah i kno the feeling sis..you v expressed well indeed...innnermost feelings well expressed
It is a terrible feeling when one gets demoted by the other for fresh bliss, , , iip
I liked this poem very very much because i cant relate to it. Great job.
Sometimes our hearts are travel without us, our minds in another direction. Love has its own direction, we never know where it'll go. That's the magic of it all.....very emotional piece...keep up the great work
you are the embodiment of emotion and love..amazing write..beautiful poem as well as u..well done =)
U must not fear 2 accept love n2 ur heart...remember that.Whatever dosent kill us only makes us stronger! ! Sweet write Peace, Hippy Sav
You're a great looking girl Flutterby, and you write well too. Cheers, Jerry