Sunday, May 3, 2009

I'M Sorry My Love Comments

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The first time you said you loved me
I was unsure if I felt the same yet I said 'I love you to.',
The first time you held my hand
I was scared but I held yours to,
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Immortal Butterfly
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Jerry Hughes 01 October 2009

You're a great looking girl Flutterby, and you write well too. Cheers, Jerry

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 May 2009

yeah i kno the feeling sis..you v expressed well indeed...innnermost feelings well expressed

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James Mclain 04 May 2009

It is a terrible feeling when one gets demoted by the other for fresh bliss, , , iip

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no name - 04 May 2009

I liked this poem very very much because i cant relate to it. Great job.

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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2009

Sometimes our hearts are travel without us, our minds in another direction. Love has its own direction, we never know where it'll go. That's the magic of it all.....very emotional piece...keep up the great work

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you are the embodiment of emotion and love..amazing write..beautiful poem as well as u..well done =)

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Alan Curtis 03 May 2009

U must not fear 2 accept love n2 ur heart...remember that.Whatever dosent kill us only makes us stronger! ! Sweet write Peace, Hippy Sav

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