Friday, June 19, 2009

I'M Sorry (Apology) Comments

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I dreamt of you last night,
a vivid, whirling pool of emotion.
I asked you if you hated me,
we were laying on the grass,
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Maya Garza
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Bele Lele 04 July 2009

Some parts of your poem are good but some are not. Very sweet!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 June 2009

Moments of intimacy captured so well in a whirlpool of dreams! ! Good writes Maya!

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