Wednesday, October 14, 2009

I'M Sorry Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I was the one who messed up everything that we had before,
For that I am truly sorry, I made a mistake and I know that for sure.
I lost the best thing in my life and I wish that I could take it all back,
The day that I walked away from you I literally felt my heart crack.
...
Read full text

Brooke Luchich
COMMENTS
Brooke Luchich 19 October 2009

Really? Maybe that's why we relate to each others poems so well :) ...

0 0 Reply
Hailey Agnew 18 October 2009

his name was micheal? that was my first loves name. (how ironic...) alot of my heartbreak poems are about him.

0 0 Reply
Brooke Luchich 15 October 2009

Thank you. It's kind of hard to teach but by reading my poems and how I do them and then practicing with your own then you should be able to pick it up :) ... Hmm well this boy was/has always been and will always be the complete love of my life.. His name was Michael and trust me you don't want to meet him lol

0 0 Reply
Ahtivah Lawton 15 October 2009

I love the way u r able to rhyme ur words down to the core and still stay on task..please teach me how to do such a thing.....once again i luuv it...who is this boy that broke ur heart...cuz i wanna meet him...lol

0 0 Reply
Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
Close
Error Success